HaikuVacuum My lover departs on a voyage to the east oh! how I’ll miss him. Written for Bluebell Book’s Short Story Slam. Share this:TwitterFacebookEmailRedditPrintLike this:Like Loading... Related
13 thoughts on “Vacuum”
Wonderful! Well done! 🙂
Simple and saying it all…….! Bon Voyage!
powerful, thought provoking.
so simple and yet so well told
When a haiku is done well as is in your poem, it is the art of mastery to lay bare the mysteries of our most treasured emotion that goes straight to the readers heart..
well done my friend,,,,
your poetry is getting me to keep back to the blog world for what I have been missing….
it is way too cool to have someone to miss,
love could be sad, yet most of it is a bliss.
missing someone says soo much! 🙂
easy to read, lots of things to think about.
HI BRO. HOW R U ..LONG TIME WE HAVENT CHAT…HOPE EVRYTHING WILL BE FINE…MISS U
short sweet and descriptive about the picture thank you ,
The longing is universal.
Simply and beautifully done. Very nice!
My week 9 slam entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/dearest-john-2/