Today a new sun rises
from the east of despair
after a night of crises
that looked beyond repair.
From the east of despair
piles of broken hopes
that looked beyond repair
was fixed back into the scope.
Piles of broken hopes,
although looked redundant
was fixed back into the scope
for never was it considered insignificant.
Although looked redundant
faith held and stayed strong
for never was it considered insignificant
despite all seeming wrong.
Faith held and stayed strong
above all the night’s crises
despite all seeming wrong
today a new sun rises.
My first attempt at a Pantoum. Inspired by Mair.
18 thoughts on “A new Sun”
Yeah a new sun. Something keeps this universe fresh. It’s like there are angels charged with polishing the sun at night and the moon at day!!!
nice!!! a pantoum hey! you go Mr. versatility 🙂 love your new pics btw, yum!
Good pantoum! 🙂
Hope is the enemy of fear…. 🙂
super smart one…
Faith and hope go hand-in-hand. We should never lose sight of the two.
Awesome message! You expressed it very well.
Thanks for sharing.
Under Blinking Stars
Like it. Into the light of a new dawn.
A new sun – perfect title
Very good, sir. Viewed from phone and between all of those RL chores, so I haven’t allowed it to marinate – nor have I had a chance to explore the site. Be that as it may, I like it. Of course you know that I (blackstarr_) shall return. V.
a lovely and beautiful inspirational piece of hope and faith!
super poem and your message that you bring across is excellent and very well put
Love the message and I agree. With each new rising of the sun–with each moment–hope begins anew! Nicley done. Nicely said!
My entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/07/cannonball-3/
Wonderful poem…excellent use of the poem…
Excellent use of the form, my friend! I am so proud that you were inspired by my pantoums. Anyone looking for more info or more pantoums, feel free to hop over to my blog. There’s a link to all my poems by form in the RH column of the front page. http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
love the message, it is great to see a new sun rising.
through every dark night there is a bright day after that. there is always hope, never lose it. once you lose it, they win.
Great poem 😉
lovely poem.. 😀