Giver of light
shine light my way
so I don’t trip
on this dark,
rocky path I tread.
My vision is good
but my sight is useless
so my intuition I activate.
Giver of light
shine light on me
so my sight becomes useful
to complement my intuition
and give me
a great vision and guide
as I tread
this dark rocky path.
First published: April 2011
Revised: 2014
I like the contrast you draw between the rocky path and the light.
Hope you are well.
Sending Christmas hugs
Well put words, beautifully done…
a brilliant piece, well done.
keep writing…
🙂
I should add that to my prayers.
What beautiful words to complement such a great attitude you have!! Methinks you are a walker in and of light already.
xo
Beautiful… I love the way you chose the words…
Have a nice day!
au usual emmanu great poem.
thanks for your support man.to know the cause of my absence , welcome to my blog
This is amazing!
@Nemi_3 tweet me sometime and I shall follow you.
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you have your style bro and i like this one alot! nice prayer to usher in easter?
i think i will add my prayers with yours 🙂
Beautiful prayer!