Crazy in love
I fell in love
with a retard
in my neighborhood.
She was unique,
gentle and pure.
Society said her mind
wasn’t right
but in her eyes
I could see
a perfect woman
and with her touch
she sent me to heaven.
She was an angel
with no wings
a genius with no invention;
I believed all her babbles
for even though they made no sense
they were genuine and humble.
Despite how strong
our love seemed
the love teachers
couldn’t understand
how a man of my caliber
will fall for a retard;
but then again
they agreed love is a mystery
that only the heart understands.
With that established
my love for her
waxed stronger
as she sent me
to higher heavens.
Submitted for Thursday Poets Rally.
Happy Valentine’s Day.
hope all is well.
missed you a lot,
come back to poetry picnic or poets rally whenever you can.
cheers.
Greetings:
Hope that you have had a great Merry Christmas.
Thanks for the delightful support along the way,
Happy New Year.
Share a piece of your poetry today at our poetry party today if you could.,
Have fun!
Sending you love and blessings.
Cheers.
xoxox
Your writing is utterly gorgeous. “an angel with no wings/a genius with no invention.” Wonderful. From one poet to another, please give the world more of this! ❤
Hello, you win perfect poet award for week 56, hope that you have enjoyed it.
It has been a delightful experience with you supporting Thursday Poets Rally, we have enjoyed your presence and talent very much, thumbs up!
fabulous poetry along the way, keep those gems coming.
Always, you are more than welcome to join our biweekly rally.
Happy Holidays!
smiles.
xoxox
http://gooseberrygoespoetic.blogspot.com/2011/12/poetry-picnic-week-16-my-life-in-free.html
Happy Birthday.
we have your date stated in our poetry picnic post,
link in a random poem to share if you could.
bless you.
keep up the excellence.
Just amazing poetry, man! I think I will follow your blog.
Love knows no boundaries
Only those who love understand love 🙂 Well done.
Greetings,
hope all is well,
invite you to join poetry picnic today, simply share a relevant or a random piece, and enjoy!
Happy Thanksgiving,
Always, your presence is sunshine to us.
Best Wishes!
your talent rocks.
xoxox
Love has no boundaries nor is the outside where love can be found.
Interesting – and – questionable.
Isadora
http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/11/19/i-will-not-tell/
Very nice! Happy picnic and happy lovelife!
“I believed all her babbles..”
That’s so sweet and so real!
You sure touched my heart with this prose!!!
~ Keep the Spark ALive..
Geesh! I was all over the place but the experience of this piece was cohesive. I can’t figure out how you did it but good job, nice work.
Retard is a word in the UK that is no long politicaly correct and one that I believe harbours images of a person with no sense or feeling, incapable of emotions.
I am so glad, that despite the use of that word, you paint a completely different picture.
nice poem… happy rally
Hello.
Love does not discriminate and know no bounds, time, distance, creed or color.
Nicely expressed.
Thanks for sharing.
Cry Not For Me
🙂 Unusual love, good poem!
so let me get this right.. you molested a mentally handicapped girl? lmfao!
LOL!
good piece.
Love is out of the reach of scientific explanations; it’s Imperial, not Empirical.
That second stanza is amazing. The best proof you got poetic talent. Master wherever that inspiration came from.
enjoyed it..
🙂
I like this, Emmanuel. A strong sense of reality and deeper thought than one might see on the surface of it. Nice one!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/11/13/another-nights-dream-3/
She was unique,
gentle and pure.
Society said her mind
wasn’t right
but in her eyes
I could see
a perfect woman
and with her touch
she sent me to heaven.
lovely love lines, your words tickle me.
smiles.
🙂
Love is without boundries, love is unconditional and … very much needed.
With that understood
my love for her
waxed stronger
as she sent me
to higher heavens.
Glad to see love transfixed, smiles.
Happy Poetry picnic.
love always send you to heaven