Love is pure:
like the one
that gushes out
of my heart
every blessed day
yearning for you,
hoping for reciprocation
but totally wasting!
Zeal is strong:
so each time
your fragile heart
builds a wall
to prevent me
it spurs me on
to break those walls
Success is certain:
is mixed with
the right formula.
So each time
my love gushes
with no reciprocation,
it triggers the zeal
to want you more
which leaves me searching
for the key,
the right formula
to win you over.
Result is end product:
and I believe
I’ll get it right
with you in delight
to have me
as your shiny knight.
For You! :*
16 thoughts on “Desire”
are you still around emmanu? miss you a lot! you know love is beautiful because its not stereotype. anyone can fall in love with any one.
I am a fellow blogger and have just been awarded “The Versatile Blogger” award by another blogger. (Please understand that I know little about it but am grateful to have been awarded it.)
As far as I can make out it is an award given by bloggers to other bloggers whose work/blogs they appreciate.
Part of getting this award is that you have to pass it along to 15 recently discovered blogs you enjoy reading.
Since I have visited your blog a few times now and really enjoyed it (albeit that I normally prefer to just read it and then leave, I thought I would award this award to you also as the author of a blog I enjoy reading.
I have also, as part of this, detailed your blog on one of my blogs “Voices of Glass” http://voicesofglass.com/2012/01/10/yay-an-awar-now-that-is-somewhat-bemusing/
I hope you don’t mind and understand that I really do enjoy your blog which is why I included it in my list.
wow! I love the thought that the other’s delight is also an end in mind 🙂
A fun read. I especially enjoyed the Success stanza.
Happy travels with a heart full of love, light and the power of the heart. Nicely written.
Very determined…love is. Love can be cruel sometimes, the ups and downs, not to mention the hurting. But I wish you success and happiness in your journey in love. Nice work. I think the message was very clear. Thank you for visiting mine too. I appreciate your comment.
I do hope your damsel responds in kind and appreciates the love of her shiny knight, Emmanuel. … Love is painful sometimes, but rewarding at others… many thanks for dropping by… xPenx
Very creative, I love the ending 🙂
solid words with perfect themes, very powerful writing.
I love the format, the words, the flow, the message, the everything.
I hope your pain diminishes with time.
Lovely. And who would say no to a shiny knight! 🙂
Creative execution…nicely done.
lovely segments of sentiments, perfectly done.
Nice one, Emmanuel. This could be called persistence.
Was that a proposal??? 🙂 I enjoyed your rhythm and flow. Thanks for a wonderful reading experience.