She tore
his heart
in pieces
and let
him bleed
to death.
He’d trusted
way beyond
the soul
could comprehend.
Memories
of him
erased
so easily
like
he was
a vulture.
Oh well
he was;
trusting
like that.
…but
then again
carcass
attracts
vultures.
…and this is my 300th Blog post. 🙂
Lord Emmanuel 
300th,
super cool…
you are in perfect shape all the way, keep it up.
😉
Hi Emanuel
Very powerful.. and the way you have treated her… in raw words… could relate to your thoughts..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Wow…what a sharp end, Em!! You made it look like she was the evil one…but then that fantastic end totally took me by surprise!! Too good, my friend!
And CONGRATULATIONS on your 300th post!! Yaaaaayyyy!! I hope to read more and more and more from you…. 🙂
Congratulations on your 300th post Emmanual! 🙂
Wasn’t sure what to make of this poem, initially thought she was the heartbreaker but then you describe him as ‘like a vulture’ which jarred me. Lol. Will have to come back and re-read 🙂
this world is full of people who are murderers faking as lovers- this was painful emmanuel- it stabbed right in the heart- ruthlessly.
Mr. 300! Thoughtful post. Vultures are attracted to carcass. Yes. They also descend upon life they perceive as about to die or in really bad shape, which to me merits the vulture roadkill. lol Awesome choice for your milestone post. Congrats, Em : )
Hopefully, he’ll learn to trust again.
a wonderfully painful 300th blog, Emmanuel, and many more to come I’m sure…
Dark and wonderfully written…I hope not from your own experience…
I ask because some think I write as truth and memory, but my imagination playa a large part…xPenx
very sad… “memories of him erased so easily…”
congrats on 300 man! that is awesome! the close is very tight…vultures indeed…
Ouch! Now whose the heartless creature here, really – he, who had his heart ripped out, or she who did the ripping? Love can certainly lead to awful places in its end, especially when deceived…dark, potent piece that really strikes a chord. I want to smack this girl so hard.
Congratulations on the 300 mark!