The Pledge

The
Body
tells
the
Soul:

“your
wish
is
my
command.”

24 thoughts on “The Pledge

  1. This is a wonderful poem…so few words expressing a great truth….

    Oh, and I love the new look of your blog…very cool, easy on the eye and colourful.

    Chloe xx

  2. As it should be. A short yet resonating piece that is indeed thought provoking. another great piece, bravo friend!

  3. I will make it my pledge for the New Year….you have a great one…looking forward to another year of great writing….blessings…bkm

  4. Provocative poem reminds me of mind/body dynamic, as well as could be taken as a proposition perhaps from beauty to spirit. Nice write, Em!

  5. ..and sometimes it’s the other way round…no..? reminds me of “the spirit is willing but the flesh is weak…”
    nice and thought provoking one shot emmanuel

  6. If only that were true.
    You always go the extra mile my friend

    Thanks for the One Shot

    moonie smiles

  7. well-written!:D~

    Oh and a side note, you are invited!

    From 10:01 a.m. Monday December 27,2010 until 10:01 a.m. Saturday January 8, 2011 (CST), think about what you want to have, do and wish for this upcoming new year. After that, use them to create a poem, short fiction, prose, haiku or anything you can think of and link them in using the comment panel on this post:

    http://riikainfinityy.com/2010/12/28/wishylissy-for-2011/

    Share your dreams, wish list and wishes over here as the new year comes greeting on us!

    Note that you don’t have to be a poet or blogger in order to do it but a link to where your work can be seen by other audiences. Do ask your friends to join in the fun as well!^_^

    Cheers and have a wonderful year ahead=D

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Creative Writing. Philosophical Poetry